Smiler

...of my new web site.

To me it's a master piece which cannot be bettered.

To other people viewing, it's a horrible mish mash of pictures and garbled text!!

Could people please give me any constructive (or even just down-right rude comments if they feel that strongly), critisisms please, before I announce it officially live and blast it onto every search engine known to man!!

www.dalamanholiday.co.uk

Thanks in advance!!

speedy

Looks and works very well Gary, good luck with the rentals

mutlu

Looks good to me. Good luck !

Raysalaff

Hi Smiler
Like your site looks good, just one thing, You don't see many holidays in brochure's with pictures of the hotel being built.

Good luck on lettings

Ray

Terry&Sue

The site looks good Gary
Best of luck mate!

v6cod

Only one thing that stands out there is only one f in Efes.

Otherwise not bad at all

juco

I havent spent too much time reading it all but here are a few observations.

My comments.....
On the home page your 1st paragraph should contain the key points that will attract renters, the appeal of the place or area, not in my opinion how many bedrooms and 3 floors high. your 2nd paragraph I would make my 1st as it has more appeal.

By saying area is allocated for `golf``health``nature` you are telling them the area does not have these facilities ...as yet, so it might put some people off.
I would also if you get the chance retake the pictures of the bedrooms with some nice flowers in them (vases) makes it more appealing also the dining table I would lay out with crockery etc.and maybe a bowl of fruit giving it a nice splash of colour.
Also I would not offer the distances to restuarants etc as the nearest is about 3 kilometres they will ask if they like the appeal of the place

I do like the layout and the colours and it is a job well done.